dijous, 5 de març del 2009

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Once upon a time I heard a strange story which happened to a very lucky boy called Paul. One day he went to buy a car, then he went to make a turn with the new car. While he was driving the car, he put his hand on the hand brake and the car began to fly. He was very worried when he found a pocket calculator. Inside the calculator, there was a message: press the green button. He press this button and the car fell to the ground. Then he returned the car to the shop and they gave him money back and also a present. Later, he went to home and opened the present. The present was a video camera and a white suit. He put the suit on and he to look at the mirror, he saw that he was invisible. He was astonished and then he looked the video camera. Later he discovered taht this camera recorded the future. He look at in the video camera and discovered that in two months, a bank robber would docked the most famous bank of the city, and he kidnapped a bank clerk. Later, he went home and he was tied a bank clerk. Two hours later, he went shopping in a shopping center with the money that he robbed. There he bougth a jacuzzi, a cash card and a walkman. Then he was saw that these three things were magic, but suddenly a politician came and arrested him. The politician went to the bank robber's hosue and released a bank clerk. Two days later, a news reporter published the notice in a newspaper, because he was there when the events happened. Paul watched this story in the video camera. In the end, he returned the video camera to the shop.

1 comentari:

carmina ha dit...

Sorry NIl

The link was wrong.
I've corrected your mark.
Good job. It's a B.